Prepare to meet opportunity.
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A member of HTTS and HTRYN attended Fantasy Con.  Here’s part of her story:

I’ve been networking a bit online, and after stopping to chat with a short story editor I’d become friendly with, I found myself sitting next to the head of a small but high-profile SF&F publishers. . . . I got talking to him and, lo and behold, one of the types of book he is currently looking for matched up perfectly with my “elevator pitch” that I’ve been rehearsing in my head for the past several months! Long story short, he asked me to email him some sample chapters and a synopsis. :mrgreen:

The moral of the story is: be brave – and be prepared!

Are you brave?  Are you prepared?  You can be both.  Take a look.

Turning Point in Revision
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This HTRYN student refers to a “minor breakthrough.”   She writes:

I figured out where Act I ends and Act II begins.

I know some of you are saying, “Well, duh. You should have figured that one out while you were plotting/writing.” But it is not where I thought it would be, and figuring that out this morning suddenly made the first part of my story make a LOT more sense (and smell a hell of a lot better!). I saw this monumental task suddenly break down into a few VERY WORKABLE chunks.

Minor breakthrough, indeed.  Drop by and discuss this breakthrough.  Give congratulations and ask about the process.

Non-fiction refined without loss of power.
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From the Eureka forum of How to Revise Your Novel:

I wrote a four thousand word essay and sent it in to my local paper without an invitation, and they called me (the same day!) and asked if I could take 4,000 words down to 400.

It was hard; I had to give up a lot…but thanks to the HTRYN my article stands at 397 words but still manages to keep the most important point. Not bad for a 90% reduction.

It may not seem like much, but I was able to write about something I care about.

This is also the first time that anyone who makes a living writing has ever said “Wow.” when they read something I wrote…

Now I want more of that please, I like it!…lol

This post deserves plenty of congrats and the usual “Tell us more about the process you used” questions. Also confetti.

The Parts of a Novel
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A Sideways writer posted this:

My Eureka moment is that I am actually writing consistently !!!

When writing scenes though….I am stumped on where to draw the line between a scene and chapter break? How many scenes to a chapter? I keep writing scenes and figure that I will group into chapters later and I’m grateful to say that I am not allowing this perceived dilemma to stall my progress.  For instance: presently I have a scene with about 1400 words….should this be a chapter instead? (I adhered to my plot card with this scene completely and didn’t veer off course as far as I can tell.)

All of that said, I realize that this is fluid and can change with the length and presentation of the story itself

So when in doubt, log on to the forum and ask ! How do you decide?

The Best Kind of E-Mail
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A Sideways writer reports the sale of her story, a modern fairy tale, to an anthology.

The acceptance letter reads in part:

Thank you for your submission to [our] anthology. We have been quite inundated with many stellar works from authors around the world, and we are very excited to offer this compilation of cautionary tales for the children of today.

I am pleased to accept your work, “The Power of Music,” for inclusion. . . .  this is a fabulous story, and I would love to publish it in the anthology.

And this is followed by the promise of “more specific details on payment, a contract, publishing date, etc.”

What could be better than a discussion of payment, contract, and publishing date?

Log in to add your congratulations.

Great story, kid, but too short for us.
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The book she wrote was complete at 50,000 words–a good length for an e-book, but the e-book publisher passed.  Is the book dead, a sad lesson on the way to publication?

No.

All it needs is another 20 or 30 thousand words.  Eek!  How can she add that many words to a completed novel without driving the prose from clean to laughably purple?  Mwahaha!  We have our ways.

We have our Sideways.

Log in, take a look, add your thoughts.  Very cool.

First Draft Lacks Sparkle
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A Sideways writer struggles with the Inner Critic during the first draft.   She worries about getting everything right: conflict, characterization, setting, pacing, and all the rest.

Meanwhile, her sentences seem to her flat, pedestrian, awkward, and dull.  She worries that she has no talent and can’t get a good start on her novel.

How do you clobber that Inner Critic?  Log in to share your ideas and maybe glean some new ones, too.