This snippet was pretty solid from the start. A few small tweaks and one HUGE rule for writers come into play in getting the story into its best possible shape.
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From the monthly archives:
June 2009
In The Case of the Ghostly Girls, I uncover the four reasons that a well-written scene with realistic dialogue doesn’t live up to the writer’s expectations. Episode Four includes:
- A Dialogue Relevance Crash
- A Dialogue Action Crash
- An Element Connection Crash
- A Scene-Planning Crash
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