In Episode Two, I take a beautifully written introduction and uncover the four major reasons the writer can’t get it to work. Episode Two includes:
- A Viewpoint/Filter Crash
- A Priority Crash
- A Human Nature Crash, and
- A Structural Crash
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CREDITS:
Writer Crash Test Series Music:
“Mysterious Stranger,” © Jack Waldenmaier
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The image “Decay Zombie” was purchased from BigStockPhoto.com, and is copyright © Chris Harvey.
The image “Haunted House” was purchased from BigStockPhoto.com, and is copyright © Dunca Daniel.
This movie was made with a MacBook, Apple Keynote, Photobooth (the author photos), Screenflow, a Logitech webcam for Mac, and a Blue Snowball mic.
This production is Copyright 2009 by Holly Lisle. All Rights Reserved.
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